Okay, hey guys. So if you don't know. These are the steps of pitching a show, first you pitch it, if it gets approved by at least one person, then you do the pilot and when it gets approved, then we'll look for a date to when it airs.
So here's my pilot.
Episode Title: First Day of Life (1)
First Day of Life (1)
It's the first day of school, Elliot and Jonathan start their first day with a bang when they start off the morning with a school prank that may get them suspended. Elliot and Jonathan have to convince the principal not to suspend them. Meanwhile, Kelsey gets dumped by her boyfriend, Barry on the first day.
The episode starts off with Elliot and Jonathan playing video games. Elliot and Jonathan talk about they're first day of junior high and how they will get bullied by the 8th graders. Then Elliot stops playing video games to go read books. Jonathan takes the book he's reading. Then Jonathan shouts "You want to have a girlfriend this year don't you?". Elliot stays silent for 1 second.
Then the intro starts.
As the intro ends, Elliot was seen with Jonathan entering the school, then they get stopped by Barry and Billy. Then Barry and Billy joke around with the 7th graders saying they can't enter the school unless they have a 7th grade pass.
Then the camera follows Barry as he leaves with Billy to go to they're class. Barry sees his girlfriend, Kelsey and tells Billy to go outside so they can talk. There was no one in the class, the class was empty. It was only them. "What's wrong" she asks. Barry responds "I'm breaking up with you, I'm sorry Kelsey. It's not you, it's me. The truth is...". "What?" she asks. "Nothing, nothing, Nervermind" he answers. Kelsey runs out of the class crying. Billy walks back in the class. "That didn't turn out good" Billy jokes around.
The screen was back on Elliot as he and Jonathan are looking for their lockers. "It's boring here in this school" says Elliot. "I have an idea, what about we plan a school prank" says Jonathan. "Your right! a school prank is a perfect way to start the year" Elliot replies. "Let's go plan it" says Jonathan.
The screen shows Kelsey crying lying on her locker door. Then her best friend, Leia ran to her. "I heard the news" Leia says. "How did you find out this quickly" says Kelsey. "Billy posted it on his Instagram page" answers Leia. "I can't believe he did that to me!" cried Kelsey. Leia comforts Kelsey.
In the Hallway, Elliot and Jonathan put paint in a student's locker. Then the student came and opens the locker and PAINT SPRAYS ALL OVER HER. It turns out to be Kelsey!. Mr. Williams runs to them and takes them to the principal's office. "You two are suspended!" yells Mr. Williams. "Please, don't. My mom's gonna kill me" said Elliot. Elliot and Jonathan try to convince Mr. Williams until Mr. Williams says. "You've been pranked by me!" yells Mr. williams as he laughs.
Meanwhile, Kelsey was walking around the school with a towel on her hand cleaning her hair. Then she sees something. She sees BARRY and LEIA kissing. Then the "To Be Continued..." sign pops on the screen. Then the episode ends.
Thanks for reading, I hope you approve it.
Plot: New York born girl, Valentivia, who is obsessed with becoming a star and Dallas born, Carono, who doesn’t care where life takes him both move to a school in Austin and become best friends. However, it’s never easy being the new kids.
Valentivia Cania [Val-en-ti-vee-ah Can-ee-ar] – Head strong Valentivia knows exactly where she wants to be in life and how she wants to get there. She is determined, strong-willed and sometimes a little mean, but cares deeply about her newfound friends and will never intentionally hurt them.
Carono Viotena [C-ay-ron-oh Vee-oh-ten-ah] – Originally from Dallas, Carono is also new to the school. Despite being complete opposites, the two instantly become friends. He has a crush on Valentivia, but don’t tell her that.
Minia Marenco [Min-ee-ah M-ah-ren-s-oh] – Queen Bee of the school, Minia is the “it” girl. With the super cool boyfriend, cheerleader best friends and don’t forget, the super awesome parents. Loved by all the teachers and students, Minia definitely isn’t afraid to show her hatred to Valentivia.
Joeanon Lanestav [Joe-anon Lan-es-tav] – Girl bullied by Minia and her friends for her name, which comes from both her parents’ names, dislikes to see people hurt and willing offers to help the two new students. But helping them seems a little too hard.
Wexter McWexter [It’s like Dexter, but with a W] – Wexter is the school nerd. He is in love with Valentivia and Minia, leading him to often have to choose between the girls. However, both of them treat him badly and often use his smarts to their advantage.
Omena Zabiniona [Oh-may-nah Zab-ee-n-ee-oh-n-ar] - Mania's dim-witted best friend who is always there to back Minia up non-stop. She often gets words confused and makes no sense, but makes up for it by being a loyal and true friend no matter what.
Lexter McWexter [Again, like Dexter with an L] - Wexter's annoying younger sister, Lexter is anything but the sweet young girl she is made out to be. In fact, she's the 12-year-old Minia.
Rono Tovonao [Ron-oh Toe-von-ay-oh] - Mania's boyfriend. He is smart, courageous, outgoing, handsome, sporty and the most loved person in the school - and those are his words!
Vame and Vane Cania [Va-may/Va-nay Can-ee-ar] - The brat younger sisters of Valentivia. They are extremely supportive of Valentivia, however are brutally honest 101% of the time.
Made it! Just, don't know what to call it or what to call the school.